On Tuesday we were lucky enough to see a show. Below are some of the students writing around this experience. We are focusing on using varied sentence starters such as First, Next Then, using appropriate vocabulary, punctuation and approximate spelling. Below are some of our work.
The Mahuika Show
On Tuesday the whole school went over to the Rarawa Clubrooms to watch a show. First the fantail got stuck in the mud and Sissy helped the fantail out of the mud. Next Pukeko came back. Then the Pukeko took the Fireman to it’s nest. I liked it. My favourite part was Sissy saving the Fantail.
By Kahoroa
On Tuesday the whole school went over to the Rarawa Clubrooms to watch a show. The show was funny. My favourite part was the pukeko because it put his beak in the water. Next they sang a song. I loved it. It was fun. By Charlotte
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